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Thursday, September 23, 2010

Responce one


I think that steve was the most responsible. I think that steve is the most responsible because he is the one who offers to drive down town to see whats going on. And because he wants to run a check on the neighberhood to see who is human and who aint. And he trys to stop everybody from being like a mob

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1 comments:

Simsbumponablog said...

Good choices of pictures and citations. You need to use capital letters where necessary. You also used "ain't", which you know is a no-no. Plus, you also have one run-on sentence for Tommy's part.

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